A New Constitition III, with Respect to the other One

Written by Translator on July 10, 2008 – 8:34 pm -

Crossposted at Dailykos.com

Last time we got paragraph 4 of Article I, Section 2. We will further investigate Article I this time.

As always, the original text is in blockquote, my suggestions in normal type, and my reasoning in italics.

I want this to be a forum for discussion, not my be all and end all. Suggestions are welcome, as are comments, flames (I do not like them much, but an occupational hazard, but do not be as silly as a critic last time that could not even match the criticism with the part), and most importantly, your thoughts on making a more perfect Union.

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