A New Constitition IV, with Respect to the other One

Written by Translator on July 11, 2008 – 8:04 pm -

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Last time we got through Article I, Section 3. This time we shall begin with Article I, Section 4 and keep going to the point that the diary begins to get too long.

I have gotten so many comments that I shall make a complete update after the end of this series, incorporating many of the great thoughts that folks have contributed. This series is designed to get readers to think, not to make my ideas the be all and end all. As always, the original text is blockquoted, my simpleminded rewrite is in normal text, and my harebrained logic in italics.

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A New Constitition III, with Respect to the other One

Written by Translator on July 10, 2008 – 8:34 pm -

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Last time we got paragraph 4 of Article I, Section 2. We will further investigate Article I this time.

As always, the original text is in blockquote, my suggestions in normal type, and my reasoning in italics.

I want this to be a forum for discussion, not my be all and end all. Suggestions are welcome, as are comments, flames (I do not like them much, but an occupational hazard, but do not be as silly as a critic last time that could not even match the criticism with the part), and most importantly, your thoughts on making a more perfect Union.

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