A New Constitition III, with Respect to the other One
Written by Translator on July 10, 2008 – 8:34 pm -Last time we got paragraph 4 of Article I, Section 2. We will further investigate Article I this time.
As always, the original text is in blockquote, my suggestions in normal type, and my reasoning in italics.
I want this to be a forum for discussion, not my be all and end all. Suggestions are welcome, as are comments, flames (I do not like them much, but an occupational hazard, but do not be as silly as a critic last time that could not even match the criticism with the part), and most importantly, your thoughts on making a more perfect Union.
Tags: Article I, Constitution, New Constitution, Teaching
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A New Constitition II, with Respect to the other One
Written by Translator on July 9, 2008 – 8:46 pm -Crossposted at Dailykos.com
My initial entry in this series was not what I would call shown a carpet of roses on which to tread, but it did perform the intended purpose of getting people to think. I will continue tonight.
We will begin with Article I, and cover as much of it as reasonably possible in this space. As always, the original text is shown in blockquote, the replacement wording in normal text, and my reasoning in italics. To make long sections easier to follow, I will slice and dice up paragraphs after the blockquote.
Tags: New Constitution, Respect, Teaching, Thinking
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